Monday, August 17, 2009

If I ruled the world...

If I ruled the world......

there would be no war, just PEACE.

But....

Imagine if everyone was there own ruler. What would the world become? How would we instruct order? Would anyone listen and become a follower of anyone else? There are so many views and opinions from different people. Each individual has there own idea of what certain things should like. This is why we have leaders to enforce the best possible opinions for us. Our world is extremely subjective. This is the reason why there really is no right answer for events such as war. Not everyone agrees with war, however we the people don't have much say and cannot instruct that we do not go. Instructions on War may include:


1. Drive these tanks around the building and go left.


2. When you get to the next street go right.


3. Be ready at all times to fire your weapons.


4. When you make the last right follow the long road all the way down and you will see a boy with bags.


5. To make sure he is our guy, drive right and stop, drive left then stop, and then drive right in front of him and stop.


6. Order his bag and take the one in his right hand.


7. If he does not follow directions shoot him.


If I ruled the world.....

there would be no war, just PEACE

Pain
There would be no pain of a mother, having to watch their child be deployed into another world of hurt.

Color
The color red would not be a symbol of blood for our people.

Description
Other races from other parts of the world would not describe us as violent Americans.

If I ruled the world.....

there would be no war, just PEACE


Army Green
Army Tanks
Army Tracks
Soldiers
Ghost towns
China at War with ?
etc.

All of the above would be eliminated for the sake of humanity to better our world. Why ride around a city with 40 plus tanks? Why go around looking to destroy something? Why kill innocent people based on your hate for one country, city, race, etc.

Some say there can never be peace, however.....

If I ruled the world, there would only be PEACE!!




























1 comment:

  1. YOUR WRITING IS GOOD, MICHAEL. I made some grammar suggestions bellow. Please let me know if you have any questions. Now, go over-the-top with description in your writing. Look at everything as if you are studying it to make an exact replica of it, in sculpture, in photo-realistic drawing, etc. !

    If I ruled the world......

    there would be no war, just PEACE.

    But....

    Imagine if everyone was there own ruler. What would the world become? How would we instruct order? (MAYBE INSTRUCT IS NOT THE BEST WORD THERE; INSTRUCT CONFUSES ME IN THAT SENTENCE.) Would anyone listen and become a follower of anyone else? There are so many views and opinions from different people. (HOW ABOUT: PEOPLE HAVE SO MANY DIFFERENT VIEWS AND OPINIONS. I THINK THAT'S MORE CLEAR.) Each individual has there (THEIR) own idea of what certain things should like. This is why we have leaders to enforce the best possible opinions for us. (NOT SURE OPINIONS IS THE BEST WORD THERE...) Our world is extremely subjective. This is the reason why there really is no right answer for events such as war. (HOW ABOUT: ... WHY THERE IS NO STOPPING WAR.) Not everyone agrees with war, however we the people don't have much say and cannot instruct that we do not go. (HOW ABOUT 'DECIDE', INSTEAD OF 'INSTRUCT' IN THE LAST SENTENCE.) Instructions on (FOR?) War may include:


    1. Drive these tanks around the building and go left.


    2. When you get to the next street (ADD COMMA) go right.


    3. Be ready at all times to fire your weapons.


    4. When you make the last right (ADD COMMA) follow the long road all the way down (ADD COMMA) and you will see a boy with bags.


    5. To make sure he is our guy, drive right and stop, drive left then stop, and then drive right in front of him and stop.


    6. Order his bag and take the one in his right hand.


    7. If he does not follow directions (ADD COMMA) shoot him.


    If I ruled the world.....

    there would be no war, just PEACE

    Pain
    There would be no pain of a mother, having to watch their (HER) child be deployed into another world of hurt.

    Color
    The color red would not be a symbol of blood for our people.

    Description
    Other races from other parts of the world would not describe us as violent Americans.

    If I ruled the world.....

    there would be no war, just PEACE

    Army Green
    Army Tanks
    Army Tracks
    Soldiers
    Ghost towns
    China at War with ?
    etc.

    All of the above would be eliminated for the sake of humanity to better our world. Why ride around a city with 40 plus tanks? Why go around looking to destroy something? Why kill innocent people based on your hate for one country, city, race, etc.

    Some say there can never be peace, however.....

    If I ruled the world, there would only be PEACE!!

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