Minji! This is amazing! This is one of the best assignments I have seen come out of this class! Awesome! Thank you.I have a few grammar suggestions:add a dash toonynx-blackchange "at" to "about"... I wonder about this man's sanity...add commas here:... my sight, and I hear him...... move the tank to the left, and if he moves...
Minji! This is amazing! This is one of the best assignments I have seen come out of this class! Awesome! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI have a few grammar suggestions:
add a dash to
onynx-black
change "at" to "about"
... I wonder about this man's sanity...
add commas here:
... my sight, and I hear him...
... move the tank to the left, and if he moves...