Mundane!
This is so common for insects, but such a rush for me. I feel like, "Oh my god Joshua," this is so exciting. I feel like I am walking on the side of my bed. The bed sheets have diagonal lines and I would love to follow that path.
Mighty!
I feel like I have extra powers inside me. Characteristics of spider-man race through my mind as I walk along this wall. There were three arrested in Western Iranian district, and I feel like I could've arrested all three of them. Slowly, I would pounce on them while sneaking on my tippy toes like a hungry lion. I would patiently wait on my enemies with poise and steady balance. They are so colorful with ideas and complex in mind, that I may have to use more than just my human instincts. The faces on the them are like none I have ever witnessed before. They have such round heads and blank faces with numbers and words tattooed upon their foreheads. Stern looks of agony troubles my competition. The main objective is to kill my enemies and put their heads on sticks for what they have done to my countrymen.
Mystery!
What if I could walk like this with no strings attached. I would be the only of my kind and such a unique figure that people would look up to me. The Iran state funded press television station would be astounded by this skill I have of walking on the wall.
Hi Mike,
ReplyDeleteI have made some revisions to your draft that I think tighten it up a bit. Please compare my revisions to your draft and let me know what you think.
Also, please go to the UCI library and take out a book on Edgar Heap of Birds. Please bring this book to class on Tuesday, August 25th.
Mundane!
This is so common for insects, but such a rush for me. I feel like, "Oh my god Joshua," this is so exciting. I feel like I am walking on the side of my bed. The bed sheets have diagonal lines and I would love to follow that path.
Mighty!
I feel like I have extra powers inside me. Characteristics of spider-man race through my mind as I walk along this wall. There were three arrested in the Western Iranian district, and I feel like I could've arrested all three of them. Slowly, I would pounce on them while sneaking on my tippy toes like a hungry lion. I would patiently wait on my enemies with poise and steady balance. They are so colorful with ideas and complex in mind, that I may have to use more than just my human instincts. The faces on them are like none I have ever witnessed before. They have round heads and blank faces with numbers and words tattooed on their foreheads. Stern looks of agony trouble my competition. The main objective is to kill my enemies and put their heads on sticks for what they have done to my countrymen.
Mystery!
What if I could walk like this with no strings attached. I would be the only walker of my kind, and such a unique figure that people would look up to me. The Iran state- funded, press television station would be astounded by my skill, walking on the wall.